Readability must always be prioritised over any artistic considerations.
Use a consistent non-serif font in white, with shadow and outlining turned on with a dark colour: this means that the text will be readable against almost any background.
Sun, Moon and Earth have capital letters when they refer to the Sun, the Moon and the Earth. They are names, so they should have capitals.
With lowercase letters they would refer to non-specific sun(s), moon(s) etc., which is grammatically correct but probably not what is meant.
Likewise "stars" should normally have lowercase 's'.
It's the same distinction between God and god(s).
Also, "earth" with a lowercase letter 'e' refers to the brown stuff we grow carrots in, (or indeed bury our ancestors in).
In general use capitals for the North, the South, the East, the West when they are nouns, but north, south, east, west, when they are relative or used as adjectives. So for example: "They came from the East", "Travelling west, they came across a stable". "Shout to the North and the South", "As far as the East is from the West..."
Days of the week and months of the year should start with capitals.
Never have 8 or more lines on the screen at once:
If splitting verses, then always do it according to the musical phrasing, not just because the screen fills up.
In verses with 8 lines, split screen 4+4 unless the music phrasing suggests otherwise.
Never split lines contrary to musical phrasing. Treat it as poetry, not prose... but
There is no need to capitalise the start of every line if gramatically that does not make sense
Always have chorus on separate screen. Convention is that the chorus is in italics
Try to include punctuation so that the words actually make sense; otherwise they can reduce to just meaningless religio-babble.
And when we sing a line repeatedly over and over again, we don't need to have each repetition written out for us, as this just looks like a tedious grid of words. Once is enough; and if it's left up there, then people just sing it again.
Likewise, don't put things like "(x3)" or "repeat" on the screen. It is up to you to put the right words up, so these are instructions for you not for the congregation.